#TheGraveyardBook #Task 1

June 16, 2016 / / 0 Comments

So happened so far I don’t know when to start this is an alright book. So what happened is a mysterious shadow carrying a polished black boned knife it was soaked in blood which is very unpleasant but if you were stabbed you wouldn’t know it would feel like a feather falling on to your back. How I imagine the blade is that it a cold sharp metal blade with cold blood covering the blade. The shadow was evil it was a grim thing to see as it looked like it were trapped in a cold metal cage. So much blood and silent murder. The silence is spooky. You could feel the cold and dark cascading down you spine. The shadow is coming from the bottom of the stairs because he needs the blood of a person who is least important.

Mr North’s Comments:

Oska,

When I read this, I can see that you have clearly taken in the atmosphere of the piece and you have used some evidence from the text in your answer.  Nice.

Next: Do you know the definition of Personification? Where has this been used in this extract and why?

This is Your Online Domain

May 26, 2014 / / 0 Comments

Hello and welcome to your personal online journal.

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Anything you post here in the public domain represents you and thus it’s important that you take care with that decision, but don’t be afraid to publish your work – as the feedback you may get from people at home, your peers and people from around the internet is only likely to enhance it.

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Make the most of, and enjoy this new freedom in your English learning!

May 25, 2014

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